Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Intro #1 - Contrast essay

My husband and his brother may have come from the same set of parents, but they couldn't be more different from each other. From the teen years to their present family life, it's hard to believe that they were raised together.
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johngoldfine said...

Well, not yet: this sets up the topic without hooking the reader or really previewing what's going to be contrasted in the later grafs.

October 11, 2007 at 5:47 AM

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